still touching up on the lyrics and the melody... may put the score up some other time... comments please? (non-derogatory criticisms allowed)

Verse 1:
In the darkness, I seek the light
In the suffering, I seek release
But the darkness knocks me down
And the pain keeps me down
And all I have is my belief, that

Chorus:
The love of God
    is all surrounding
The love of God
    is everlasting
The love of God
    it never fails
And I will put my faith
    in the love of God

Verse 2:
I keep on falling, time and time again
A blameless life, I fail yet again
Now I realise that its true
Perfection only comes from You
And all that I can do is trust, in

Verse 3:
I live each day Lord, only for You
Each step I take now, I take it in You
And though I know it may be tough
As I walk the narrow path
I know that You have made it straight, through

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